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Post by K.C. Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:43 am

it is, Yaka o.o
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Post by Yakate Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:52 am

Add another jutsu ^^
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Post by K.C. Fri Jul 24, 2009 3:07 am

nah, it's cool^^
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Post by Yakate Fri Jul 24, 2009 3:10 am

I meant that your RPC-based BL should have more jutsu o.o It looks kinda empty...
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Post by K.C. Fri Jul 24, 2009 3:13 am

umm, suuuuuure.... lemme think of jutsus...
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Post by Yakate Fri Jul 24, 2009 5:26 am

Actually, and admin should post all this for me Dx
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Post by Naruto Fri Jul 24, 2009 6:34 am

Thanks for helping Yaka... could've waited but still it was helpful. ^^
Anyway...
@ Yaka:
Good bloodline justu, it's well thought out and relates to the BL, please wait for other mods opinions.
@ Kit:
Yup it's fine to suggest a BL and then buy it for your RPC in the future, that's what I did for mine. Anyway I think that your bloodline is also very well thought out, also because of all the disadvantages in the BL you should either add a B-ranked justu or make the user have even more powerful ice techniques, meh it's your choice though.
Anyway please wait for other mods opnions.
Thanks! ^^
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Post by Yakate Sat Jul 25, 2009 12:30 am

I couldn't think of anything better o-o;; *Bribes all mods to check and accept* xD jk...
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Post by Torigoma Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:15 am

K.C. ^_^ very well though out, I'll look in to in in detail later today.
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Post by Naruto Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:02 am

So... can I add both of the bloodlines to the official BL list?
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Post by K.C. Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:04 am

I'm adding new jutsus, please wait o.o
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Post by Naruto Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:09 am

... okay you can add one more B or C ranked justu. o.o
Or you can add 2 D ranked.
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Post by K.C. Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:20 am

done^^
well, I added two C-Ranked because you can only get one depending on your type... (Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu)
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Post by Naruto Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:22 am

K.C. wrote:Winter Fox Spirit
Rank: C
Element: Ice
Description: The person who possesses this Bloodline will have basic ice manipulation skills, like forming a weapon made out of ice out of thin air. This Bloodline increases the person's resistance to Ice, and decreases their resistance to Fire greatly. The person will perform better in cold temperatures and must maintain their body heat to a temperature below zero using the Bloodline Jutsu. The possessor of this bloodline must not go near sources of extreme heat for an extended period of time, or they will experience major dehydration. The user of this bloodline also gains fox-like senses, although the characteristics of a fox are not always obtained. They gain enhanced hearing, smell, reflexes, and speed. The senses are also a disadvantage. Strong scents, loud sounds and others are a major nusiance. The possessor of this bloodline cannot use Fire-type Jutsus.
Sealed Text: "Power over ice, and speed like a fox.... Will you take this sealed power in exchange for your power over fire?"

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Name: Seal of Ice
Element: Ice
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user implants a small amount of Ice chakra unnoticedly inside the opponent's body using a speedy physical attack. The opponent's temperature decreases slowly but steadily. This needs close proximity with the opponent. This can also be used to regulate temperature for the user. This jutsu is for the Ninjutsu-raised ninjas.
Rank: C

Name: Illusion Technique: Freezing Wasteland
Element: Ice
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user creates an illusion that makes the opponent think that he/she i trapped in a wasteland full of snow with no source of heat anywhere. This jutsu can be broken easily if the opponent has a strong will. This jutsu is for the Genjutsu-raised ninjas.

Name: Ice Barrage
Element: Ice
Type: Taijutsu
Descrition: The user charges at the opponent with unusual speed, shifting directions to confuse them and look for an open spot. The user then attempts to strike the opponent with a flurry of ice chakra-enhanced punches and kicks, leaving the user open for a direct hit when it misses. This jutsu is for the Taijutsu-raised Ninjas.

Just wanted one that would fit my RPC o.o' *meeps and hides from ubermods* meep /).(\
Okay the justus look good! ^^
Except the illusion technique doesn't make sense in a way (see bold writing).
If you change that both of the justus seem good.
What ranks do you think you'll make them? o.o
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Post by K.C. Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:29 am

aww, I make typos all the time xDD
sowwie, I'll edit it^^
I thinkI'll mke it C-Ranked o.o
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Post by Naruto Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:30 am

Alright I think it's good now! ^^
Wait for teh other mods.
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Post by maxime Tue Jul 28, 2009 8:37 am

i think it looks fine
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Post by Naruto Tue Jul 28, 2009 8:41 am

Alright now Tori's turn! ^-^
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Post by Yakate Sat Aug 01, 2009 2:00 am

Tori o_O Someone should PM Tori just to let him notice this thread xD
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Post by maxime Sat Aug 01, 2009 4:14 am

he will get to it when he can..
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Post by Yakate Sat Aug 01, 2009 4:39 am

Tori's been a bit busy lately...

btw, now that I have 500 Shine points, I can get an A-rank BL, right? After I lose my current one v.v
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Post by maxime Sat Aug 01, 2009 4:50 am

to lose your current one you have to buy the BL remover aswell.

but if it says that an A rank BL can be purchased for 500shine points then so be it.
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Post by Torigoma Sat Aug 01, 2009 4:58 am

^_^ looks good to me lol *thumbs up*

^_^ the Only A-rank Bloodline that has a Restiction on it is the "Light's Embrace" bloodline which is ment only for the Kashoku Clan and Speciel Events that I am Currently Working on ^_^.
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Post by Naruto Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:29 am

If you have enough shine points then it's fine to buy a BL of your choice...
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Post by Yakate Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:34 am

Don't I need to remove the one I have now? o.o
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