Akimoto Susumu

Name: Akimoto Susumu

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Village: Doesn't have any, so he's an outlaw (though not in the bingo-book... yet)

Family: His mother is dead by now and most other relatives died in battles. There is a sister that Susumu is not aware of though, and his father is also alive.

Element(s): Wind

Rank: A-rank

Bloodline: Nagare no Chi (Stream of Blood)
This bloodline gives its owner the ability to completely control one's own blood and use it any way you can think of (also prevent it from clotting). They can even stop their blood from flowing out of a wound. They can also make their blood as hard as steel.
People who have this bloodline have a mix of dark grayish colored blood and normal colored blood in their veins, and every time they get 'serious' their veins can be lightly seen as dark lines through their skin.
Of course blood can run out and thus kill the user, but this bloodline also gives an ability to tremendously speed up the creation of new blood-cells, so dying because of blood loss is not that likely to happen.
Another ability is to smell blood from far away and by that determine who it is. Of course the blood has to be outside of the person's body.
Usually the only way to get blood from yourself is to make a cut, thus inflicting pain on itself and that is the downside of this bloodline.

Personality: Susumu in general is pretty easygoing and is usually taking everything too lightly. He sees the world as a big playground for him and likes to show it without a shame. Occasionally he gets serious though, and that's when you don't want to be around because there will be blood, either his own or his opponent's or most likely both. It's almost like his personality changes completely and he becomes a coldblooded killer.
Even though he can kill without regrets, he doesn't like killing that much. In fact he has never even killed a person and that's why he isn't in the bingo-book. Villages don't really see him as a threat.
Susumu enjoys having company with him even if it would be bad. As long as he doesn't always have to be alone. Thus he tends to interfere in other people's business and just won't go away or give up even if people force him to. Of course that's why he has gotten into many fights, though he calls it “playtime”, which most likely angers the opponent.
His favourite drink is sake of course and usually he's at least a little drunk if not much. That's where his whole 'taking things too lightly' shines. But being a little drunk in battles is an advantage for him because that way he can withstand pain better and his blood becomes thinner and flows better. Of course he has a lot of experience in fighting while drunk.

Appearance: Susumu has a dark brown hair that is about shoulder-length and his eyes are yellow-colored. His body is quite slim and athletic because he 'trains' almost every day. There are two kind of deep scars on his left cheek, and he got those in a battle. Though he has them covered because he's pretty ashamed of them and because they “ruin his looks”. He also has a large scar on his back.
His shirt is black and red -colored and only covers his chest-area. The shirt's sleeves are kinda loose. He also wears black hakamas and a red torn cloth around his hips.
On his back he carries a large zanbato which he calls “Zero”, and on his right hand he has a small but strong armor which he uses to block some attacks. The armor has been hardened with his own blood so it's almost impossible to break.
He has few shuriken hidden in his left sleeve, but mostly he uses his blood to make shurikens and kunais. In his right sleeve he has a small tanto that he uses to cut himself.


The past: Susumu was born in the Akimoto family that didn't live in any particular village. The family trained their young ones to become strong ninjas so that they could continue the tradition and bring money to the family. Akimoto family was well known to be skillful bountyhunters and almost every village was asking for their services.
A little after Susumus birth, his parents divorced. His father was the leader of Akimoto-clan and because he left, everyone started to fight who would become the next leader. Eventually the whole clan broke apart, but Susumu's father had already taken Susumu with him. His father was the one who taught Susumu about life and trained him to become the successor of the bloodline.
When Susumu turned 12 his father gave him some money and his sword and left him because he saw that Susumu would be able to take care of himself now. Years he wandered through different countries having part-time jobs and sleeping under the stars. Of course he trained most of the time and got into a lot of trouble (fights mostly).
After turning 20 he met someone who was as strong as he was. They didn't have any reason to attack each other, but the something just told them both to attack. It was almost like they were each others natural enemies. Though both survived the battle and their paths parted, Susumu got 2 deep scars on his cheek and a large one on his back. The other person got a large scar on his stomach. Susumu still seeks revenge on that person, even though they didn't even have a reason for that battle.

Strengths and weaknesses: Susumu has pretty much talents in all areas, but mostly he uses ninjutsu and taijutsu. Thus genjutsu is probably his weakest point. In battle he likes to show off his skills and his flexible body by doing some incredible moves that require dexterity, for example high jumps. He is also quite fast with movements and doing hand seals and his eyes are also used to fast speeds.
His body in general is quite vulnerable though, and he can't withstand that many hits, so he tends to evade rather than taking the hit head-on.
Susumu is also quite skilled with using the zanbato that he has, and he has even made his own fighting style with it. He uses his body's movements to give speed and strength to each swing with the sword.
Usually he doesn't use his bloodline's abilities, because he doesn't want to become too dependent on his bloodline. He doesn't depend on it much also because he doesn't like cutting himself. Only time he truly uses his bloodline's abilities is when he's serious.

Jutsus:

Chi Shigure – Rain of blood
The user makes a small cut on himself and gathers small bits of blood above him and his opponent. Once there is enough blood, he does hand seals and makes the blood fall almost like a rain piercing almost everything on its way. The user himself controls the blood so it won't hit him. Otherwise this technique is very dangerous.

Chi no Yoroi – Armor of blood
The user brings a small layer of his dark gray blood above his skin and hardens it only a little because otherwise it would be hard to move. The skin will appear completely dark gray. The blood will soften the blows that are taken, so it won't completely block them. This jutsu will need intense concentration the whole time and when it ends, the blood flows down the user's body. It will also drain a moderate amount of chakra.

Chi-ha no Jutsu – Blood-edge technique
The user dips his sword in his own dark blood and the sword is completely covered in it. The blood doesn't clot and it improves the sword's cutting power tremendously and also makes it able to 'extend' even though it's the blood that's extending. Maximum length that it can extend is 6 meters. This jutsu also makes the blade double-edged.

Chi Bunshin no Jutsu – Blood clone technique
The user makes a cut on himself and forms clones made of blood. If the clone gets in touch somehow with the opponent, it will immediately turn back to blood and take hold of the opponent so that he will get stuck. Something sharp can cut the blood but by pure strength it is almost impossible to break free.

Shuurajou no Jutsu – A scene of carnage technique
The user lets himself bleed on the ground and the blood will quickly cover a realtively large area on the ground. After that, the user forms a few hand seals and bloody spikes will rise anywhere in the area from the blood. This jutsu can be done after “Rain of blood” when the blood has gathered on the ground. Basically anywhere where the user has his own blood, there can rise a bloody spike from the ground. This is effective when taking care of large ammounts of opponents that are unaware of the user's powers.

Aka-soubi no Jutsu – Bloody equipment technique
The user makes a small cut on his hand and he can then form shurikens or kunais or any sharp weapons from his blood.

Sakki no Jutsu – Thirst for blood technique
If the user can get some amount of his own blood inside his opponent's body (through a wound), he can slow down his opponent's blood circulation for a short while just by doing a few hand seals. Slowing down the blood circulation will cause slower movements and less strength, but it won't effect chakra circulation in any way.

Chi no Kyuukoku Kikou – Ultimate armour of blood
This is the ultimate defense of the bloodline, but it is not recommended to be used that often. A small cut is made on either hand and hand seals are made. Quickly a dome of blood will form in front of the user's hand. The chakra in the dome completely absorbs any jutsu that the opponent directs towards the user. Defending against a jutsu will take a little more chakra from the user than what the opponent used on his jutsu.

Issoku Akaken no Jutsu – A hundred bloody fists technique
This is a very complex taijutsu move and requires precise chakra control. This taijutsu will also make some serious pain to the user. The user makes several cuts on his hands but keeps the blood inside. While he punches towards the opponent, some of his blood will come out from the cuts and form into fists that fly fast towards the opponent and then go back into the user's body through the wounds. Every time those fists will come out and go in, it will inflict noticeable pain to the user's hands.

Kanpuu no Jutsu – Cold wind technique
The user lets chakra flow to his weapon and when ever he swings the weapon, it releases chakra in the form of a strong cold wind in line with the swing. If the wind hits it will almost feel like a medicore punch and the damages are the same.

Junpuu no Jutsu – Favourable wind technique
The user forms one hand seal and after that the wind will boost his speed and lengthen his jump. It will also make movements in air easier, as if the user would have some platform to take speed from. It can also change the direction of movement in air for one time. This is useful when trying to evade something in air.


(I want Kiri and/or Ryuku to check if there's anything that needs to be corrected in this character biography ^^)

omfg.... too ... much.... to.... read .... *dies by seeing so many letters* x.x

What? This was only 4 pages in Opneoffice. xD My longest character biography is about 8 pages long ^^''

all you say doesnt make me think about it any better...
*dies again* x.x
im just too lazy to read big texts that seem to have no end...
especially if they are written in a heavy way

Lol xD I know there's a lot of text but it shouldn't take that long to read it ^^''
Well if you're too lazy to read it, then Ryuku at least has to ^^'' I want to be fair to others, so that my characters will be reviewed also.

dude the BL is 2 strong and u didn't write any weak points in it except the cutting thing wich van mean he makes a small cut on his finger...and saying he is good at everything except genjutsu is not a wekness!...

Bloodline is 2 strong? o.O So you think controlling your own blood is stronger than controlling any fire and being completely resistant to fire? :p It would be same as controlling water, except it's blood and I didn't mean making a small cut on his finger -_- Small wounds don't bleed much. And if you read the jutsus... "hand" usually means his whole hand.
He has a weak point: His body can't take much hits. GENJUTSU IS ALSO A WEAK POINT. Even if your character doesn't use genjutsu, it can still be a weak point and it's a Dang big weak point.
I didn't say anywhere that he is good at everything... I said that he has talents in all areas.

ok...but remmember im not immune anymore^^

Yeah I know but at first you were gonna put it like that ;p

Looks good to me..

tenrai im so gonna be ur first spar!!!

just a question...u wrote in ur bl: "also prevent it from clotting"...if this happens u cant stop bleeding...and you die...so u have no need for this,and u wrote that u can stop ur blood from flowing so that means ur blood will need to be clotting to to that.

... you CAN do that, because you have control over your blood... It's not something that happens everytime automatically. I kinda meant like when you do that blood-edge jutsu and the blood will cover the sword so it wouldn't clot then.
When I wrote that it can stop bleeding, I meant that it can stop the bleeding immediately after the wound is made and close the wound by making the blood clot.

ok...but with all that u don't have a need for ur blood not to clot...it does not matter if it clots on the sword or not...
also i didnt really get this:
Sakki no Jutsu – Thirst for blood technique
If the user can get some amount of his own blood inside his opponent's body (through a wound), he can slow down his opponent's blood circulation for a short while just by doing a few hand seals. Slowing down the blood circulation will cause slower movements and less strength, but it won't effect chakra circulation in any way.

if the blood flow is slower why would the movement be slow,the only hing that will happen is that your opponent will only have enrgy for a short time...like a couple of minutes.

But yes it does matter if the blood clots or not. Liquid and solid are two different things ;p

Movements will be slow because with the blood flowing slowly it won't bring the... blah... I don't really want to go too much into biology with this (I'm too lazy to look up the terms in english). Well nonetheless when that energy runs out, the movements will slow down.
And anyways when your strength from the whole body decreases, naturally your speed also decreases

he deals with blood i deal with the nervous system on my character so i understand what he means

blood clots are not solid...they are more in the middle.

yes red blood cells move oxygen and other vitamins to the muscle cells but that takes time to run out.
the body has it's own sources that he keeps in "white muscels" that are used for a short time and red muscles" for a long period of time.plus the cells in the body can break down Protein and other things such as sugars(glucose) for energy and organs like the stomach will move blood to more vital organs such as the brain lungs and muscles.

tenrai does your blood go to the heart and slow down the pumping of the heart?

Would it be possible then for the blood in the opponent's body to move the vitamins and oxygen away, so that it'll run out faster?

Nomad... Well.. the blood goes completely through the circulation system, so yes. And naturally if the bloodflow slows down, the heart should slow down also? Heh, It could easily even be a killer-jutsu, but it would be kinda too easy then to kill o.o

yes thats what i thought of...u need to stop the process of the red blood cells and prevent oxygen,vitamins,sugars and minirals from moving from the blood cells throgh the vains and into the mucles,this is called diffusion.that will do the trick^^

about the moving oxygen and other stuff away...don't think it's possible cuz of special Enzymes in the cells that cling to those stuff

but even if diffusion takes place... it never cant be effective enough for you to be able to get energy

but thats what happens...

like i said...
diffusion is just too weak to be effective enough so you get your energy... >.>

are you listening?!?!?!...diffusion is used to replenish ur bank of sugar and stuff,without diffusion you won't be able to lets say run for more then a few houndred meters,the cells break down the oxygen and others to make energy

but you need blood flow to bring oxygen and sugar and whatever to the places they are needed
(i have a slight feeling we have a diffrent understanding of what diffusion is)