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Post by Tenrai Fri Jan 09, 2009 5:40 am

I meant post the whole character biography with the necessary edits that I asked you to do ^^''
Anyway that story is... something I could've done in less than 3 secs. You can seriously do better than that o.O Otherwise even normal RPing will give you hard times.
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Post by Ayaname Fri Jan 09, 2009 5:42 am

i rp just fine...far from my 1st time!
i just don't want to write anything more...this story has a short history and future goals...thats all u need.
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Post by Tenrai Fri Jan 09, 2009 5:50 am

Um... I didn't mean that you would write "all that I need" o.o
Nonetheless post the whole character again in this thread with the necessary edits.
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Post by Ayaname Fri Jan 09, 2009 5:52 am

i have no more stuff to edit and all i need to change i already did!
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Post by Tenrai Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:03 am

omfg... seriously... READ MY POSTS AGAIN... If I look at the character... there isn't that water weakness thing... what it does to your character... few jutsus lack explanations... you haven't edited the fire immunity thing..

Don't try to fool me and say that you don't have any more stuff to edit.
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Post by Ayaname Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:17 am

wow sorry...thought i did...
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Post by Ayaname Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:34 am

i edited it again...hope u like it...the bio is an old one i came up with that ryuku sent me
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Post by nomaddynasty Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:51 am

see thats why i dont want to create a character to much work and it looks good grif
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Post by Ayaname Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:56 am

thx nomad...like most things in life with hard work u get good thing...after im finished with this ill be rping and ill have lots of fun doing it^^
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Post by nomaddynasty Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:58 am

im real lazy by nature so eh i get by and i prefer an actual game over rping
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Post by Tenrai Fri Jan 09, 2009 12:25 pm

But nomad... Can you do ANYTHING in a game? Very Happy That's the point of RPing ^^ You can create a character that you prefer and you can move it freely and do things freely.
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Post by nomaddynasty Fri Jan 09, 2009 12:28 pm

yes tenrai that may be true but the way your doing it with the tight restrictions and must have detailed stuff takes the fun away from it for me no offense
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Post by Tenrai Fri Jan 09, 2009 12:30 pm

Burning chain still lacks a description, and you basically took those other descriptions out of TNR ^^'' But I can accept that... but I won't accept it after this.
With that Fire Clone... How does it differ from other clones? I mean, does it explode when hit or does it burn the opponent if he hits it with taijutsu or something o.o

The past was good ^^

btw nomad... I try to make the restrictions as minimal as possible. If it takes out all the fun then you really haven't RP'd ever o.o I even was in a naruto RP where you could not make a bloodline for just 1 character and things had to be more detailed than that.
If you want I can post one of my character descriptions even though it's in Finnish... But you can see what the standard for information length was o.o
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Post by Ayaname Fri Jan 09, 2009 6:17 pm

no tenrai it's just a simple clone...i can make it explode if u want...lol
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Post by Tenrai Fri Jan 09, 2009 6:57 pm

Lol, that's ok ^^ just write the description for burning chain and you should be done o_o If I haven't forgotten anything
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Post by Ayaname Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:18 am

tenreai i added some stuff like in jutsus and strengths and stuff
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Post by Tenrai Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:37 am

5.Fire blade-the user collects chakra into he hand and turns it into a katana of fire that can melt anything.

This hasn't been edited yet o.o If it really can melt anything it would melt his hand.
Burning chain still lacks a description.
And in fire blast, the bigger the ball the more chakra it consumes of course?
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Post by Ayaname Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:39 am

ill change the blade,ill add the burning chain thing and as for the third thing...thas a givin lol
done****
but thing is i think it should be able to melt anything cuz he can controll fire,maybe it should do some damage to him but not much.besides that i finished what u told me to do.
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Post by Tenrai Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:48 am

Letting it melt anything would be almost like one-hit kill jutsu. And being able to melt anything would mean so big heat that it would literally just melt everything around it. ALMOST anything is not enough.
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Post by Ayaname Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:51 am

fixed once again hope itll do...
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Post by Tenrai Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:03 am

Ok ^^ Accepted. Post it to the database now
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Post by Ayaname Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:06 am

thank u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
finally this is over!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol and now tenrai...I WILL KILL U Twisted Evil lol
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Post by nomaddynasty Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:40 am

and this topic is over and tenrai i have rped on gaia online lots of times it just wasnt that restricted i described my clothes and past but not my attacks
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Post by Tenrai Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:43 am

Then that really wasn't RPing -__-'' Basically coming up with new stuffs all the time is not RPing.
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Post by nomaddynasty Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:45 am

to me that is rping rping is different to each person some like detail others dont it all depends on the person i persoanally prefer less detail it keeps the rp more interesting
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