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yeah.. they are better... the second is better...
but still you should do something against those frame amounts... lol
maybe there is something that you can choose how long a frame lasts... search for something like this
but still you should do something against those frame amounts... lol
maybe there is something that you can choose how long a frame lasts... search for something like this
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Aha, thats what i need...i'll look for it but in the meantime I'll continuing with what im doing, I just learned how to make rain
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WELL!! my opinion is that they are not bad for a first attempt if thats the case.
thats alot of harsh feedback but i guess you are still in the learning process.
me myself i wouldnt have a clue on how to make avis and those examples are probably the worst ive seen in a while but they arnt that bad.
at least u experimented with different techiniques in a way.
different framing
text
pics
but as i said thats my opinion!
thats alot of harsh feedback but i guess you are still in the learning process.
me myself i wouldnt have a clue on how to make avis and those examples are probably the worst ive seen in a while but they arnt that bad.
at least u experimented with different techiniques in a way.
different framing
text
pics
but as i said thats my opinion!
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for the last two...
the first has two timings events, images and text, that makes the eye get dizzy afetr a while.. so if you join the timing of images and text (join text and images and then they change) and also, the font for the text is not in my likes.. if you have already choose "monochrome" (black and white) and little green (it is ok, because Lee is asosiated with it), do not look for crazy fonts, look for something more simple.. the idea is to read teh text and assosiated with images.. so do not make it hard for ppl to read it..
the second...well the same for text and images timing... and choose better color for your name.. and i suggest do not make it vanish in any moment.. it will look better if you keep the name in its place abd just change the color as the back image changes.. for this images.. i recomend to just change the big image (ichigo and his hollow) and for the colors in the name.. white whe the shinigami is, and black when the hollow is (to make contrast) and not makeing just little images changing, better all image change..
ciao..
the first has two timings events, images and text, that makes the eye get dizzy afetr a while.. so if you join the timing of images and text (join text and images and then they change) and also, the font for the text is not in my likes.. if you have already choose "monochrome" (black and white) and little green (it is ok, because Lee is asosiated with it), do not look for crazy fonts, look for something more simple.. the idea is to read teh text and assosiated with images.. so do not make it hard for ppl to read it..
the second...well the same for text and images timing... and choose better color for your name.. and i suggest do not make it vanish in any moment.. it will look better if you keep the name in its place abd just change the color as the back image changes.. for this images.. i recomend to just change the big image (ichigo and his hollow) and for the colors in the name.. white whe the shinigami is, and black when the hollow is (to make contrast) and not makeing just little images changing, better all image change..
ciao..
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Is what im currently working on.
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now that looks friggin awesome ^.^ *hi5s ryuku*
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lol thanks, so far it does. I made the background while i was messing around with random brushes, then rendered this pic off some wallpaper, added rain and bam o.o all came togather..now to find some text.
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awesome thats giving me motivation to try creating an avi ^.^ lol
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There...
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For me, thats kinda good.
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Imo in the 2nd picture it is flashing too fast... The color of the font could be something else, because it doesn't quite fit the font. And that blingbling on it also.. If I were you I'd make the text do something else than blink, but that's just me~
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My best work yet o.o The background is made from scratch too.
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Wow That looks kinda good~ even though in the last pic I can see that ichigo is a little off from the bottom border. Still you're doing better and better every time.
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Its kinda blurry and the text font dosen't really match...(But thats just me)
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Well... there is a small gap in the bottom of that pic as we can all see. The movement of aizen is kind of clumsy... maybe make him faster and add a little motion blur or something o.o I'm not gonna say anything about the text.. dunnolol
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I do not see it as a gap, it is more like a frame, a red frema, maybe if Ryuku change the color of that frame to black the gif will improve... i personally do not like fast movment in gifs, and i will suggest that after Aizen appears, the image should wait 10 seconds.. then.. change ir again...
ciao..
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lol well after 10 seconds people will leave, back to the drawing board.
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wow ryuku...
youre doing some nice work there ^^
youre doing some nice work there ^^
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Yeah this one sucks...great background and pic, but the animations shape and text is killing me x.x
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Its average, to me.
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way better than what i can do... *draws picture on the wall with crayons look mum look ^^*
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I just made that recently.
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that is pretty kool Ryuku ^^.
what is the yellow looking hedgehogs name? lol
what is the yellow looking hedgehogs name? lol
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