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Post by AiKirikaX Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:33 am

yeah.. they are better... the second is better...
but still you should do something against those frame amounts... lol
maybe there is something that you can choose how long a frame lasts... search for something like this
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Post by Ryuku Tue Dec 23, 2008 8:48 am

Aha, thats what i need...i'll look for it but in the meantime I'll continuing with what im doing, I just learned how to make rain Cool
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Post by maxime Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:33 am

WELL!! my opinion is that they are not bad for a first attempt if thats the case.
thats alot of harsh feedback but i guess you are still in the learning process.
me myself i wouldnt have a clue on how to make avis and those examples are probably the worst ive seen in a while but they arnt that bad.
at least u experimented with different techiniques in a way.
different framing
text
pics
but as i said thats my opinion!
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Post by Rionz Wed Dec 24, 2008 5:04 am

for the last two...

the first has two timings events, images and text, that makes the eye get dizzy afetr a while.. so if you join the timing of images and text (join text and images and then they change) and also, the font for the text is not in my likes.. if you have already choose "monochrome" (black and white) and little green (it is ok, because Lee is asosiated with it), do not look for crazy fonts, look for something more simple.. the idea is to read teh text and assosiated with images.. so do not make it hard for ppl to read it..

the second...well the same for text and images timing... and choose better color for your name.. and i suggest do not make it vanish in any moment.. it will look better if you keep the name in its place abd just change the color as the back image changes.. for this images.. i recomend to just change the big image (ichigo and his hollow) and for the colors in the name.. white whe the shinigami is, and black when the hollow is (to make contrast) and not makeing just little images changing, better all image change..

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Post by Ryuku Wed Dec 24, 2008 7:10 am

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Is what im currently working on.
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Post by maxime Wed Dec 24, 2008 7:42 am

now that looks friggin awesome ^.^ *hi5s ryuku*
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Post by Ryuku Wed Dec 24, 2008 8:30 am

lol thanks, so far it does. I made the background while i was messing around with random brushes, then rendered this pic off some wallpaper, added rain and bam o.o all came togather..now to find some text.
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Post by maxime Wed Dec 24, 2008 8:38 am

awesome thats giving me motivation to try creating an avi ^.^ lol
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Post by Ryuku Wed Dec 24, 2008 10:43 am

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Post by Doomsday Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:47 pm

For me, thats kinda good.
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Post by Tenrai Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:56 pm

Imo in the 2nd picture it is flashing too fast... The color of the font could be something else, because it doesn't quite fit the font. And that blingbling on it also.. If I were you I'd make the text do something else than blink, but that's just me~
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Post by Ryuku Thu Dec 25, 2008 1:32 am

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My best work yet o.o The background is made from scratch too.
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Post by Tenrai Thu Dec 25, 2008 2:46 am

Wow Surprised That looks kinda good~ even though in the last pic I can see that ichigo is a little off from the bottom border. Still you're doing better and better every time.
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Post by Rionz Thu Dec 25, 2008 3:47 am

yeah, this one is good, you surely have improve in no time..
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Post by Ryuku Thu Dec 25, 2008 10:17 am

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Post by Doomsday Thu Dec 25, 2008 4:10 pm

Its kinda blurry and the text font dosen't really match...(But thats just me)
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Post by Tenrai Thu Dec 25, 2008 9:05 pm

Well... there is a small gap in the bottom of that pic as we can all see. The movement of aizen is kind of clumsy... maybe make him faster and add a little motion blur or something o.o I'm not gonna say anything about the text.. dunnolol
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Post by Rionz Fri Dec 26, 2008 12:58 am

I do not see it as a gap, it is more like a frame, a red frema, maybe if Ryuku change the color of that frame to black the gif will improve... i personally do not like fast movment in gifs, and i will suggest that after Aizen appears, the image should wait 10 seconds.. then.. change ir again...

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Post by Ryuku Fri Dec 26, 2008 2:20 am

lol well after 10 seconds people will leave, back to the drawing board.
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Post by AiKirikaX Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:55 am

wow ryuku...
youre doing some nice work there ^^
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Post by Ryuku Sat Jan 10, 2009 11:45 pm

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Yeah this one sucks...great background and pic, but the animations shape and text is killing me x.x
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Post by Doomsday Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:42 am

Its average, to me.
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Post by maxime Sun Jan 11, 2009 3:32 am

way better than what i can do... *draws picture on the wall with crayons look mum look ^^*
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Post by Ryuku Wed Jan 21, 2009 1:18 am

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I just made that recently.
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Post by maxime Wed Jan 21, 2009 2:32 am

that is pretty kool Ryuku ^^.

what is the yellow looking hedgehogs name? lol
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