Post your Poems!

by **Weather** Sun Oct 19, 2008 8:54 am

Here you can post your poems.
Just put it in a spoiler tag if its really ong, and don't forget to sign it.

I, personally, will be posting many.

also you can comment on them here too

by **AiKirikaX** Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:08 pm

the only poem ive ever written

Those eyes

Those eyes
I hate those eyes
Looking down on me
Thinking to be better than me
Me being less worth than them
Why do they look like that on me?
What have I done wrong?
They smile at me
I’m smiling back
A fake smile
We both do
I’m aware of it

I hate those eyes
It’s a horrid feeling
Sometimes it happens to me
Crying at night, in bed
Crying myself into sleep
Asking why
Thinking it would be better to be dead
How would they react?
Would they be sad?
No
They would pretend to be
On the surface
But inside
They couldn’t care less
Not a single tear
Would be seen on their cheeks

I hate those eyes
They give me a horrid feeling
Sometimes it happens to me
Crying in bed, at night
Crying myself into sleep
Asking why
How to end this
To end this agony
Finding a piece of luck
A piece of happiness
Sometime, somewhere, with someone
Who acknowledges me as I am
Or the absolute solution
To die
To bury this pain with my corpse
Leaving it all behind
For ever

Those horrid emotions
When will they have an end?
They are looking down on me
Those eyes

- by AiKirika

you can guess i was in a very deep mood when i wrote this

by **TwiSteD_ProSpecT** Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:30 am

Love is in the air
Baby I got you which means Heaven must have heard my prayer
I feel your touch in the the drops of rain
Your tender voice acts as a remedy for my pain
I can sense you by my side even though we are miles apart
Is it all a dream,you are too good to be true
But I'm glad to have found you
I promise I'll never let you out of my sight
When you are petrified and overwhelmed by darkness
I'll guide you to safety and be your shining light
I'm always with you but don't take me for a creep
----------------------------INCOMPLETE------------------------------

[left]

by **TwiSteD_ProSpecT** Wed Oct 22, 2008 5:32 am

I don't know what my heart yearns for anymore
even though my senses are all perplexed
I set out on the path set by the stars
tears fall down my face every step of the way
but i still continue the journey of righteous harmony night and day
each day is a dilemma,nothing goes as planned
time doesn't wait for anyone so the only thing one can do is move on
I've lost faith in a lot of things and learnt to adapt in the harshest condition
my heat's already broken,pieces fall off along the way covered in blood
I hope someone can use it as a guide to trail me and someday set me free
The burden and pain I've held so long are starting to crack
The route to find me cannot be found on any map
No one can truly understand me or know me as I am even if I'm present everywhere even in the air you breathe
I can relate to you but you cannot relate to me
Is it because I've no physical form or am I just a part of your being
Whatever it is, I'm unlike you
Sometimes I fear that I'll cease to exist
but the pain and suffering will still continue to fest
That's why I stay close to you even though it pains me a lot
I'll always continue to love you long after you have crushed my heart

by **yanagi** Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:52 pm

kiri you made me cry. It's very sad but you can feel the pain inside...

I like it..

by **AiKirikaX** Sat Nov 08, 2008 9:01 pm

thanks yanagi

it came into my mind while taking a shower...
but it gives away all what i felt

by **yanagi** Sun Nov 09, 2008 11:20 am

mmmmmmmmmm. maybe you're lonely at that time..
I've made a poem a long time ago, it's all about love coz at that time I'm really inspired but it's in my own language, if I translate it, the rhyme would be lost and I also lost the paper I can't remember the words since that's the only time I've been inspired very much.....

by **gogeta12** Wed Nov 12, 2008 9:42 pm

*flails coz can't find depressing poetry* e.e
bleh xD *grabs random stuff i have saved on my laptop*
The darkest night has left the day
the night has come to stay
the light that wonders in the darkness
finds itself full of darkness
full of deceit and wonder
full of joyless hunger
the light fades and crumbles in the night
the light has lived its longest fight
The darkness swallows it whole
the darkness wins this time of woe
The light will return to battle again
the endless fight of dawn and bed.

finds herself trapped in the void of space oh no not the space yout think the space of dark and endless nights
the space where dawn always fights to keep its rights
the riseing sun can never set, the endless darkness keeps it in rest.
The sun may rise one day if it can win the battles day. Yet light has caught the youngsters eye
the endless night has tried to hide
the wonders of the earths glory
what is there to give this story the endless night howls and curses. fearing the childs curious march
to see the lights shineing arch. The night frightens those who dare to listen to the
howling glares as the night wails onwards to keep the child from the wonder.
What happens in this childs dreams what happens is the time to see. The wonderous light fill the void
and search for more then glitters of old. The child tugs the small glow and helps the sun battle the old.
The night curses in dismay the sun has won the right to stay.

by **AiKirikaX** Tue Nov 25, 2008 9:20 pm

just randomly thought something up... for ShineHQ nindo:

AiKirika wrote:

I make you smile, I make you cry.
I make you feel the greatest love,
I make you wish to die.

.

by HeavensAllow Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:54 am

Shining Star:

A fallen star comes from the sky
Opening ways throught the empty clouds
Making a path for me to pass
To meet you, forever at last
You made me walk miles and miles
Throught montains and seas, making me fly
I search for you around the globe
Finding you watching me, when im way below
I followed your star around the sky
Leading me to you, in mountains highs
Your waiting for me in open arms
I cryed and cryed, for i finnaly found peace...

Razz

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