Bloodlines

and everything needs to go through the spell checker XD

(nice that my firefox has this for english... lol )

AiKirikaX wrote:and everything needs to go through the spell checker XD

(nice that my firefox has this for english... lol )

Yes...it does x.x im too tired to fix it however.

Ryuku wrote:

Torigoma wrote:Jutsu for: Shadow Gale
Name: Dark Winds
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: The User calls a wind filled with Ill intent, driving the Target mad from anxiety.

Jutsu for: Ocean's Dirge
Name: Drowned Titan
Type: Summoning
Element: Water
Description: The User summons a massive Giant formed from the body’s of those that died at Sea from the Ocean bottom, then attacks the Target.

Jutsu for: Ashes to Ashes
Name: Ash Body
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Fire/Earth
Description: The User is able to shape parts of their Body by turing it into ash and reshaping it

All need more description, especially the second. I might add the second and first, but the third is implied in the bloodline...and ash is not an element lol

That better?

AiKirikaX wrote:and everything needs to go through the spell checker XD

(nice that my firefox has this for english... lol )

Will do

the hell... since im having a spellchecker on firefox... that is automatically showing me every fault...
im going to make it when youre going to finally post them up... ok?


and what about... not double posting?

Yes, first two will be added.

Spell Checked, Uses Microsoft and Google, So if anythings poping up Firefox is wrong.

so far there isnt any fault anymore... despite those japanese words.. lol

im talking about your last post with the quote

Torigoma wrote:Spell Checked, Uses Microsoft and Google, So if anythings poping up Firefox is wrong.

Im sorry but kiri is right. There were several things spelled wrong such as discription(description) and random words in a sentence capatalized, microsoft word only gets so many things.

>_< DANG MICROSOFT, Well thats the best I can do, Like I said, I'm Dyslexic, I have a hard time recognizing thing like that. Not that big a Thing though is it?

EDIT: Changed what I Could see, Not sure if I got it all though

maybe copy and paste the text... run it through WORD
as it also tells grammatical faults...


(nice ryuku has a new avi.. need to update the staff list again )

Did that, got nothing, mabye Its broke lol

who knows XD

leave it for now... we'll take care when its about to get finished..

anyway.. im gone to bed

Good Night

Good night kiri, we will take care of it later.

Hand in Hand
Rank: C
Element: Dependes of Their Natural Element
Description: A Strange Bloodline that seems to Change it's nature according to the user. They are born with a Spilt Personality that manifest itself as a Golem formed by the Bloodline. Both are completely Insync and share all thoughts.
Sealed Text: "Hand in Hand We'll Walk Life's Path, and In Death, share It's Embrace".

Signature Jutsu:
Name: Doppleganger
Element: Depends
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The User Forms a Golem, Linking Their "Other Self" to it, and attacking that target.

Sudden Onslaught
Rank: D
Element: None
Description: Those born with this Bloodline are Are extremely Strong, and have amazing Stamina, but are very weak againt Ninjutsu and Genjutsu
Sealed Text: March forward, never stopping, never ceasing, Blazing the trail ahead.

Signature Jutsu:
Name: Sudden Impact
Element: None
Type: Taijutsu
Description: The User Hits the target with amazing force and speed, but can't be used consecutively do to the strain on the body.

First one added, second will be.

The Scales
Rank: S
Element: Poison
Description: Those born with this Bloodline have a Natural resistance to Poison, they have a Gift for making poisons and medicines out of anything they find, They are also able to Produce several types of poisons and medicines in there Body.
Sealed Text: "Look Child, how the Scales of Life tilt, Your hands shall deside which way they bend"

Signature Jutsu 1:
Name: Death's Blessing
Element: Poison
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: A Very Deadly Poison produced in the users body, once It enters the body, very little next to Death's Bane can cure it.

Signature Jutsu 2:
Name: Death's Bane
Element: Poison
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: A Very powerful Medicine produced in the users body, it accelerates healing and Cures Poisons, one of the few known cures for Death's Blessing

I think Doppleganger would be a better name for the Jutsu, the otherones just Copying the Bloodline name.

Ok, will do, and i'll add the new one...btw no double posting x.x...

-_- trying to stop it, but it get har with the Longer posts, keeps bringing me back to the top when I type.

EDIT: how is Sudden Impact Genjutsu?

EDIT: Second Shadow Gale Jutsu an't up

Sorry, im copying and pasting other jutsu to keep the template right the whole way and I copied a genjutsu but never changed it, its fixed now.

Shadow of The Forest King
Rank: B
Element: Wood/Shadow
Description: A Strange Jutsu that alows the user to control all forms of Life, Though (Large Animals, Summons ect) the More strain it puts on the user compared to Lesser Lifeforms (Insects, Plants ect). Also alows the User to Call on some of the power of the Forest King, giving them Great, if short lived, burst of Speed, Strength, and Insight.
Sealed Text: "In the Shadow of the King, The Forest Sleeps"

Signature Jutsu 1:
Name: King's Decree
Element: Shadow
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Using his bloodline, the user takes command of it Target, the More Complex the lifeform, the more effort it takes, and the less time it can be maintained

Signature Jutsu 2:
Name: Gift of the Forest King
Element: Wood
Type: Taijutsu
Description: The Users calls on part f the power of the Forest King,giving them Great, if short lived, burst of Speed, Strength, and Insight.

I'll add any and all bloodlines you make later...in the meantime just edit them into one post.